EROTICA/ROMANCE NOVELS

His Girlfriend’s Step Mother Takes a Turn (Shared by the MILF Taboo Erotic Story)” by Svetlana Scarlett

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When young and inexperienced Charlie gets a job working with his girlfriend at a local day spa… he never imagined the kind of trouble that he could get himself into. It all starts on his first day, when his girlfriend informs the horny lad that her stepmother, a beautiful MILF, will be visiting the spa with another mature woman. She tells him to prepare their rooms…But the youthful, curious man finds himself overwhelmed by carnal urges during the task — and to his surprise, the sexy older woman barges in, catching him during the act. She decides to teach him a few naughty things… without protection! And with the help of her curvy friend. But what happens when the young girlfriend discovers the taboo affair?

There are a lot of X-rated short stories for sale on Amazon for the Kindle, but I don’t usually buy them, because even for stories that are just .99 cents, it doesn’t seem worth it. If I want to read short stories, I can go to Literotica and read for free. But this one caught my eye because of the subject matter (I love older woman/younger man stories), and it was listed as 125 pages, so I thought that it was a good deal. It turns out to be a bit of a bait and switch.  The lead story is one of two short stories in this collection, written by Svetlana Scarlett. And then there are “previews” of three separate stories in this book, so that’s what stretches it out to 125 pages altogether.

His Girlfriend’s Step Mother Takes a Turn

This is the story of Charlie, a 19-year old man. He’s dating a woman named Sasha, who has gotten him summer job as this elite spa that she works at. Sasha and Charlie are both virgins, and Charlie is perpetually horny. He agreed to take the job working at the spa, because he’s heard rumors of some of the wealthy older women who come to the spa seducing the young men who work there, and he’s wondering if this could be true?
On that first day, Sasha tells Charlie that her stepmother, Hazel, is going to be coming in later with a friends, and he has to go get their room ready for them. We learn that Dalia is a longtime object of Charlie’s desire. Her voluptuous body is described in great detail as Charlie fantasizes about her. As Charlie is setting up massage table and towels for Hazel and her friend, he gets so hard thinking about her, that he can’t help but pull out his cock and start masturbating. But he gets so wrapped up in his fantasies that, just as he’s about to orgasm, Hazel walks in!
Of course, Hazel is turned on, and proceeds to seduce him, first taking his cock in her hand and jacking him off, putting his hands on her breasts, then she strips for him and has him feel her ass. Then she makes him get on her needs and eat her out until they both cum, and then finally she lays back on the massage table and tells him to fuck her. He enters her, with her directing on how exactly to pound her. Just as he’s about to climax, Hazel’s friend, Karrie, another voluptuous older woman, walks in!
Karrie quickly strips and joins them, making Charlie pull his cock out of Hazel, so she can suck it a little, before he puts it back in and urges him to keep fucking Hazel. And then Sasha walks in, just at the moment of Climax. And then it ends.

Plot-wise the biggest complaint about this story was the involvement of the other women. The sex between Hazel and Charlie is hot by itself. And then when Karrie comes on it looks like it’s about to become a threesome, which could be even hotter, but her involvement is brief before it’s over. So what was the point? Likewise, Sasha’s entry at the very end. All we know is that she’s shocked to see what’s happening and then it’s over. If she wasn’t going to be able to join in, then just leave her out of the fantasy.

And, oh yeah, another problem is that in the first chapter of the story, Sasha’s stepmother is named as DALIA. Been then from 2nd chapter on she’s called HAZEL. It was confusing when I first read it, I had to check back to make sure they weren’t talking about too different women. So that’s a pretty bad screw up.

MILF LOVE

This is the story of Daniel, a young man in college. Daniel is, by his own description, a shy pathetic virgin, whose never dated or even kissed a girl. He thought he would have better luck when he got to college, but no dice. So he just threw himself into his education. For extra credit, he signed up to become a Teacher’s Aide. He gets hired by a new Professor, an older woman named Krista Thruste (seriously), describes as beautiful and voluptuous with huge breasts. Really, a LOT of time is spent on describing her large breasts and how they jiggle in her clothes and practically hypnotize poor Daniel. And she also has a “succulent ass.”

During their initial meeting, Daniel becomes hopelessly aroused, and when Krista noticed the erection in his pants, she wastes no time in invited into a backroom behind her office, which she calls her Extra Credit Room. It turns out to be a room with just a sofa in it. Krista then proceeds to seduce young Daniel, and they have sex. Although she insists beforehand that if they do it, he must cum inside her, which Daniel readily agrees to it. So for the next several pages, sex is described in explicit detail. She blows him, titty-fucks him, then has him fuck her until he explodes inside her vagina. Then they rush to get dressed to get ready for her next class. It’s at this point that he noticed a picture on her desk of her with a young boy, her son. Whom she says she had with her last Teaching Aide. That makes Daniel realize why she was so eager to have him cum inside, because she wanted to get pregnant again. And he seems fine with that, and we’re told that there were several more encounters with him and Krista until she does in fact get pregnant.

The description of the sex in this story was hot, but the bit with the pregnancy at the end kinda killed it. Who wants to hear that? This is a fantasy. In fantasy sex, there is no pregnancy or STD’s. Plus there’s the fact that having big breasts is one thing, but the way this story describes her, she dresses extremely provocatively with her cleavage heavily exposed. And I’m thinking, she’s supposed to be a college professor. She would not be dressing like that at work.

And then we have a preview of another short story, which is available on Amazon. It’s the first chapter of:
Maple Street MILFs — Naughty Mature Mothers and Their Panty Dropping Seductions! by Diana Quippley

The premise is that there is a group of women who all live in this same neighborhood, all around the same age who have raised their children together. They’re all married women, but are unsatisfied by their husbands. And so they get together and secretly plan a way to get satisfied, now that the youngest of their children has turned 18, they all have young adult children, male and female, living with them. And somehow they all know that all of their children are virgins. So they make a bet where they each will put their children’s name’s in a bowl and then randomly pick one (the women are’t allowed to select their own children, of course) and then each woman will have 7 days to seduce that child and take his or her virginity.

It’s an intriguing premise. But this preview ends before the actual selection begins.

The next two previews are from other stories written and published by Svetlana Scarlett. First up is A NAUGHTY MOTHER

This is the story of a young man from Shane, another shy virgin, who tells us how he’d had a crush on one of his mother’s friends, and neighbor, and older woman named…Mrs. Goodbum (alright). Shane is just returning home from the summer, after his first year away at college, and he is excited when his mother informs him that Mrs. Goodbum is looking forward to seeing him, as he imagines losing his virginity to her. But the preview ends soon after Shane arrives at her house, before anything happens.

And then there’s:

UNDER THE BARON’S CONTROL

This is a historical fiction story. The synopsis of which didn’t interest me, it’s a different genre being older man/younger woman, so I didn’t even bother reading this one.

While the two complete short stories are decent enough, there is some padding in them, a lot of extraneous stories or internal monologues,  that feel like it’s just to make the stories longer. This is the same in the previewed stories. If you want to make stories like this long, then add more sexual encounters, or more those longer.  If Svetlana Scarlett could learn to make better use of her time, her stories could be much hotter.

Chacebook rating: 3 STARS

 

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