EROTICA/ROMANCE NOVELS

MILF STORIES: BUNDLE by Destiny Step

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This collection takes three shorts stories written by “Destiny Step”, which had each been previously published separately, and puts them all together for the affordable price of just 99 cents. So I had to try it out.

STEPMOM’S ORDERS
The collection begins with this 60 page story, which is a little odd, at least as far as the premise goes. This is the story of 18 year old Kara, who lives with stepmother her Jessica, despite the fact that they hate each other. When Jessica married Kara’s father, she immediately treated Kara like an inconvenience. Then three years later Kara’s father and Jessica got divorced, and the father moved away, while Kara agreed to continue to live with Jessica so she could finish out the rest of her High School years with everyone she grew up with.  Why Jessica would agree to assume custody of the stepdaughter that she didn’t even like is unexplained.  Anyway, Jessica is always very strict with Kara, but now Kara is going away to college in one month, and Kara can’t wait to be away from Jessica. Kara has a boyfriend Aaron, whom she’s dated for a year, but they haven’t had sex yet. Kara is a virgin, although she’s frequently horny (the story opens with her masturbating in her bedroom while watching porn). The problem is that Aaron cock is too big (later guessed to be around 10 inches), Kara is afraid of it. She’s gone down on Kara a few times, to keep him happy (and he’s gone down on her), but it’s difficult enough to get it in her mouth (she’s always left with a sore jaw afterward), so she figures her pussy would be even more difficult.  But then one night she gets the brilliant idea that she should get Aaron to seduce Jessica, and really fuck her hard, so that it would hurt.

Like I said, the premise is odd.

But Jessica turns the tables, having overheard the plan, so instead she gets Aaron and Kara and forces them to have have sex, to teach Kara a lesson. She makes Kara blow Aaron again, and then to get Kara ready, Jessica goes down on Kara, getting the girl really hot but stopping just before Kara has an orgasm, and at that point she commands Aaron to fuck Kara. Of course it hurts Kara at first, but soon she gets into it. Plus Jessica plays with Kara’s clit while Aaron fucks Kara, making it feel even better. Even though Kara points out that she’s not on the pill, Jessica demands that Aaron cum inside Kara, which he does. And when it’s all over, Aaron leave, although Jessica tells him to come back for more the next day.

MILF NEXT STORE
This 48 page story is told from the POV of a conspicuously unidentified woman. By that I mean she never tells us her first name, nor does anyone refer to her by it, only a few pages into the story does someone call her “Miss Baker”, so we know her last name. Well, Miss Baker tells us that she’s in her “early forties” and for the past decade has been living with and raising her now 18-year old stepdaughter Alyssa. Alyssa’s father ran out on both of them (no mention is made of Alyssa’s biological mother), and Miss Baker has raised Alyssa, who calls her “mom”, by herself ever since.

We’re told that a few months earlier Alyssa started dating a 19 year old man named Trevor, and from the minute Alyssa first brought him home, Miss Baker felt instant attraction, and would often find herself looking forward to the times Alyssa brings him over. One days she even listen outside the door as Alyssa give Trevor a blowjob. But eventually Trevor breaks up with Alyssa, and Miss Baker tries to comfort her. Soon after, Trevor comes by one day while Alyssa is out, and Miss Baker lets him in, assuming that he wants to see Alyssa, but he confesses that it’s her that he wants to see.

He grabs her and kisses her, which she gives into, but then he immediately backs off, until she lets him know that she wants it too. They kiss again, she leads him to the bedroom, he grinds his cock against her ass from behind while kissing the back of her neck and reaching around to fondle her breasts. She turns around he takes his pants off and is surprised at his large cock. The biggest she’s ever seen. She goes down on him. Then he goes down on her. And then finally they bang, until Trevor brings her to a full body orgasm

MILF TEACHER
“I want her bad.”
That is how this 46 page story begins. It is written from the POV of 19 year old John. John is in college, but is failing “math.” John has a wealthy father who expects John to take over his business empire some day, but John, like many rich kids, is more interesting in partying and having fun. Well John’s father insists on hiring a tutor to help John do better in school, and that tutor turns out to be 31 year old Miss Grey, and per that opening line, John makes it clear to us how incredibly attracted to her he is, with her light brown hair, blue eyes, and “curvy” body. In fact, right after his first tutoring session with Miss Grey, John has to rush to his bathroom to jack off. Over the next few sessions, where Jessica comes to his house to tutor him, John struggled to pay attention, as his lust for her grew. Then finally one day Miss Grey claims that because her car is in the shop, she needs John to go to her house for their next session. But when John arrives, Miss Grey makes it clear that she has more than math on her mind.

She take shim to her bedroom and has him sit as she strips for him. Then she pulls off his pants and underwear and gives him a blowjob, then she gets on the bed and he goes down on her, bringing her to orgasm, before he finally enters her and pounds her until they are both satisfied

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Overall, it’s a decent trio of stories. I question some of the choices for the set up of the stories. Like in the first two, it’s an odd choice to have the adult women be single stepmothers. As I point out, it’s a little odd to have girl living with her stepmother whose not even married to her father anymore. In the first story Jessica could still be married to Kara’s father, but maybe he’s just away on business when all this goes down? Maybe he’s in the army, and serving overseas for the past 3 years or something? At least that would be more realistic (not that “realism” is the highest priority in stories like this…) as to why the two women live together. And in the second story the older woman could have just been Alyssa’s actual mother, not her step-mother.

And then there are the flaws like, as noted, the lack of the POV character’s first name being revealed in Milf Next Door. Also in both of the first stories there are mentions of not using birth control, with Alyssa saying she’s not on the pill even though Aaron cums inside her anyway. In the 2nd story, Miss Baker also worries after Trevor cums inside her, because she wasn’t on the pill either. It’s like, why even bring that up? In porn fantasies no one is supposed to worry about things like pregnancies (unless that’s the point of the story) or diseases. So just don’t go there.

The final story, Milf Teacher, I have no complaints at all with (well, there’s a couple of grammar mistakes, but I can overlook that). But even with the flaws of the first two, that’s just on things like premise. When it comes to writing the actual sex scenes, then it’s all good. Destiny Step makes it easy for us to imagine the pleasure as we read her descriptions of the action. And that’s the sign of a good erotica writer.

Chacebook rating: 4 STARS

 

 

 

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