EROTICA/ROMANCE NOVELS

SHARING MY MILF 3 by Cheri Zee

So after finally reading and reviewing SHARING MY MILF 2 by Cheri Zee, I downloaded the Nook app onto my iPAD, so that I could buy and read part 3 of this story. I found the 2nd story to be a bit of an improvement over the first one. Does this third story continue to upward trend? Read on to find out.

Caution: Spoilers ahead.

First, writer Cheri Zee makes a strange choice of having Jessie (the story is still told from her First Person POV) recapping previous events. She did that in the 2nd story, but it’s worse here because now she’s recapping the first two stories, and doing so in detail. About the first dozen pages of the story are recaps of Jessie’s encounters with Trevor, then Derek, and then Shane, as well as with her boss, Ted. And that’s all just so unnecessary, and really a waste of space. It would be one thing if these were all full length novels, but these are short stories. If people want to know what happened before, they can read the previous stories, and likely have. Seriously, who is going to download a short story that is labeled as part 3 before downloading and reading the first two parts?

The recap also went off in a weird direction for a bit, as Jessie began to fantasize about the outcome of recent experiences, including getting pregnant and giving birth in the hospital with both Trevor and Shane on either side of her holding her hands, as she has twins, a boy and girl, without knowing which man is the father. Is that the direction this saga is heading in?

Back at work, Jessie’s boss Ted keeps pressuring her to go out with him, although she’s reluctant to be seen with him in public. Finally she agrees to go to dinner with him, as he assures her that he knows an out of the way place that’s discreet. At home, we learn that Jessie has been resisting continuing a sexual relationship with Derek, despite his insistence. Finally, she offers him a compromise, where they’ll get into bed together and “fool around” but absolutely not have sex, and Derek agrees to stop whenever she tells him that he’s going too far. So this is a bit odd, as we get a whole scene of the two of them in bed kissing and feeling each other up, and at one point when Derek is on top of her Jessie thinks he’s about to ignore her wishes and stick his cock inside of her, and she’s actually ready for it even though she’s said otherwise, but instead Derek pulls up to her chest and asks if he can titty-fuck her. And even the was internally ready for sex now, she doesn’t say so and instead lets him titty-fuck until he cums on her chest and then goes to sleep, leaving her a bit frustrated.

Likewise, as a reader I was also frustrated. That whole scene just felt pointless, as I don’t know why Cheri didn’t just go ahead and have them have sex, which is what we atnt to read about, instead of playing around the issue.

Then Jessie has her date with Ted. He takes her to this fancy restaurant, wines and dines her, and with the alcohol she’s drinking Jessie starts feeling tipsy and getting turned on. Ted starts talking seriously about divorcing his wife so he could be with Jessie. He takes her back to his luxury townhouse, there’s a lot more flirting, and she makes the same deal with Ted that she made with Derek, to fool around in bed but not have sex.

Or, I should say, they agree to not have “S-E-X”.

Yes, they spell it out, and it becomes a recurring thing throughout the night as they each repeatedly say “S-E-X” instead of sex, which just sounds childish to me.

Anyway this time Ted took viagra, and apparently that made his cock get significantly bigger when fully erect than it was in the previous story. And when he takes his shirt off, Jessie notes that he’s in better shape than she expected for a 70 year old man. So once again we get long descriptions of the two people kissing and fondling each other. At one point when they’re both fully naked, Jessie gets on top of him and rubs her pussy along the shaft of his cock until they both cum, and then in her excitement she accidentally lets him slip inside her, and she loves it. Afterward, it’s clear that Ted wants this to be a regular thing, but Jessie is uncertain about that because of his age.

The next day is Saturday, so in the morning Derek confronts her again, and they agree to give each other nude massages. Derek does Jessie first, and ends up fingering her to orgasm. And then she returns the favor by giving him a handjob. Then they take a shower together and finally end up having sex again.

Then Jessie, Derek, Shane, and Trevor, go out with two girls that Derek and Shane have been dating to a wine-tasting event. During that time, Trevor discretly confesses to Jessie that he Derek and Shane have all admitted to the others about having sex with her, which makes her upset. But then Trevor also brings up how he and Shane have privately discussed having a threesome with her, and she is up for that. And I guess that’s the cliffhanger ending, with Cheri Zee promising a part 4 coming “soon.’

Unfortunately, this story was a major let-down. The non-sex sex scenes were a waste. And I didn’t care to read about Jessie with her older boss. The main appeal of these type of “MILF” stories is to read about them banging younger men. And a lot of the character moments between Jessie and Derek where they’re arguing about their relationship and whether they should keep having sex were also uninteresting. When she actually writes about sex, she’s very good, but Cheri Zee still has a lot of improvement to make in how she structures her stories.

I don’t feel like recommending this story, I feel like you could just stop with the first two. Unless she does manage to stick the landing with a part 4, although it seems unlikely that there will ever be one. But I’ll periodically check B&N just in case.

Chacebook rating: TWO STARS

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