EROTICA/ROMANCE NOVELS

SHARING MY MILF by Cheri Zee

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Full title: Sharing my MILF: Young Stud Lover; Sexy Stacked MILF

This short story is 53 “pages” (variable depending on what type of device you read it on) and it’s basically an older woman/younger man story. 39 year old divorced Jessie having sex one night with 24-year old Trevor, who is a friend of her former stepson.

Now, like I said regarding my last review, one thing I expect with short stories is that they tend to get right to the “good part”, ie the sex. The author’s typically don’t spend too much time on background or set-up, which can be fine if done right. Except in this particular story, I do feel like author Cheri Zee spends a little too much time on set-up. The story is divided into three chapters, in which the sex finally happens in the 3rd one. Much of the first two chapters could have been cut in order to shorten this. Or otherwise she should have just gone ahead and expanded this into a full-novel (as it turns out, there is a sequel short-story written for this, which I have no read yet).

So, our lead character, Jessie is 39, and divorced from her ex-husband Peter, who cheated on her with a younger woman, whom he is no engaged to. It’s not clear how long they were married nor how long it’s been since the divorce, but we know that Jessie hasn’t been out with anyone since then, and the divorce left her feeling a bit insecure about her looks. She’s described as a beautiful woman, but voluptuous with big breasts, and she thinks she’s gained a little too much wait. Peter’s son Derek still lives with Jessie, and calls her “mom.” He’s 22 and has recently graduated from college, but has had difficulty finding a full-time job. Jessie is also unemployed and looking for work, as they both are struggling with only Peter’s irregular alimony checks to support them.

So most of the first chapter is dedicated to Derek attempting to help Jessie get ready for an upcoming job interview she has. A lot of time is spent with him trying to convince her to wear a really sexy and revealing outfit to the interview, which he thinks will help her get the job. Jessie is unsure, but Derek constantly tells her how attractive and sexy she is, which flatters Jessie and causes her to admit to herself how attractive Derek is to her. This all appears to lead to what you would assume would be a sexual encounter between the two, but it doesn’t go there in this story. Instead we read about how Derek spends two weeks teaching Jessie all about word processing and spreadsheets to prepare her for the job (it’s a secretary at an insurance company) and how the two of them go on a crash diet together because Jessie wants to lose as much weight as she can before the interview, and Derek goes along in order to encourage her.

The interview comes, and Jessie gets the job. The details are skipped over, but it’s clear that Jessie did indeed have some kind of sexual encounter with her new boss, who is described as an older man in his 70’s. All we’re told is that the interview lasted two hours and Jessie (who narrates this story) says “the old lecher made some demands and I had to do a few things I wasn’t particularly proud of,” but when it was over he hired her, and she starts the next day. Now right there, that’s another obvious waste. If you’re going to include that detail, then you might as well include the actual scene. That’s what I mean by how this should have been saved for a full-length novel, or just not include it at all.

Jessie of course hides that detail from Derek, who is just excited that she got the job. He takes her out for dinner and drinks to celebrate, and while at the bar they run into two of Derek’s friends, Shane and Trevor. Earlier in the story, Derek had told Jessie about how his friends often talked about her, agreeing with him that she’s hot and sexy, so Jessie is a bit flustered when she sees them now. She’s still wearing her sexy outfit from the job interview, and she can feel all three young men ogling her during the night. At one point Trevor asks Jessie to dance, during which he gets a little handsy with her, although she doesn’t really object, and he even convinces her to let him kiss her, which she enjoys. Again, it seems like the story is leading up to her being with all three men, but instead Derek and Shane meet a couple of young women and end up going home with them, as Derek asks Trevor to take Jessie home.

And that’s where we get to the sex. Trevor takes Jessie home, and immediately their hands are all over each other. They start kissing, Trevor takes off her top and begins sucking on her breasts. Then he picks her up and takes her to his bedroom and lays her on the bed as he undresses. Trevor is described as very fit and muscular, so Jessie is impressed as he gets undressed, but then is pleasantly shocks when he drops his pants to reveal a HUGE cock. She gives him a blowjob, which she says she’s never done before, not even for her ex-husband, but Trevor is clearly satisfied with her effort, holding her head until he cums in her mouth and she swallows it all. Then she lays back as he goes down on her, bringing her to orgasm, after which he climb on top of her and fucks her long and hard until they both cum again.

I’ll note that during there is mention of Jessie’s “unprotected and fertile womb” and as they both get ready to climax Jessie thinks about “his naked cock about to fill me with his virile, potent seed.” I don’t know if this is implying a pending pregnancy, but it’s not something either character talks about afterward. Instead, after the sex, Jessie implores Trevor to leave, as even though she assumes Derek will be out all night, she still has to be ready for work the next morning. She also makes him promise not to tell anyone what happened, although it’s clear that neither one regrets it, and Jessie tells us that she definitely wants to see Trevor again.

So, that’s the story. Once it gets to the sex, it’s good. But, like I said, a little too much time wasted on the set-up to get there. Still, at only 99 cents, the story is worth reading. Chacebook rating: 3 STARS

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