EROTICA/ROMANCE NOVELS

SHARING MY MILF 2 by Cheri Zee

First, some things have changed since I first bought and reviewed the first short story in this series, SHARING MY MILF by Cheri Zee, in October 2016. All of Cheri Zee’s work has been removed from Amazon. I have no idea if she did that voluntarily or not, as I never could find any type of website or social media presence for this writer (& I presume it’s a penname). I had already bought this follow up story on Amazon, and so I still have both available on my Kindle, the link I posted in the previous review no longer works. However, upon googling the name, I see that Cheri Zee still have multiple erotic short stories available through BARNES & NOBLE, in which her first story was made available in November 2013, and her most recent (the part 3 of this series) was made available on May of this year. So now if you want to buy her work, which is only available digitally, you’ll either need to have a NOOK or you can download the Nook App on some other PC or device (such as I’ve done on my iPAD).

Now, on to the story. Caution: spoilers ahead.

So the basic premise is that this story picks up the next night after the first story. Jessie comes home after her first day at her new job, which she doesn’t enjoy very much, but is grateful to have, and Derek offers to help her relax by giving her a foot massage, as he asks her about her day. He also quizzes her about what happened between her and Trevor the night before, and while she at first denies any sexual contact, she eventually admits to just giving Trevor a blowjob. Derek finally confesses his own lust for his ex-stepmother, and he and Jessie give into temptation and have sex twice that night. First in the kitchen, with Jessie bent over a table, and then again after that in the shower.

Then the story switches to Jessie at work the next day, and we learn about her female coworkers, who all seem to instinctively dislike her because she’s younger and sexier than they are. And then there’s a flashback to Jessie interview with the boss, and we learn exactly what Jessie had to do to get this job, which was alluded to in the first story. Ted Johnson is an old man, around 70. In his private office, Jessie had to first take off her shirt and bra and let him see and feel her breasts, and then let him titty-fuck her until he came on her breasts. Jessie willingly went along with it, although she didn’t particularly enjoy it, and that’s how she got hired.

Then the story ends on a Friday night, where both Trevor and Shane were coming over to Jessie’s place for dinner. Derek was out on a date, so it was just Jessie with the two young men. During the middle of the dinner, Trevor gets called away on an emergency, and Shane proceeds to make his move on Jessie until she gives in, and they end up having sex in her bed. Afterward she falls asleep, and then wakes up a couple of hours later and hurriedly drives Trevor home before Derek returns.

Okay, overall, this was a better story than the first one. The sex scenes between Derek and Trevor were both very well written. Cheri Zee helps paint a vivid picture in your head so that you can easily visualize the sex as it’s happening, seeing Jessie’s voluptuous body with her big tits and fat ass. And the young men in the story are all well-built with huge cocks. Although once again Zee makes some allusions to possible pregnancy. When Derek first enters her she says (as, once again, this story is written in First Person from Jessie’s POV) “I was too caught up in the moment to ask him about a condom and I hadn’t used birth control in years.” And then ask he’s reaching climax she talks about how she wanted to ask him to pull out instead of filling her “fertile womb with his virile and potent seed,” but she was too caught up in her own approaching orgasm to actually say it. But then she doesn’t bring up the subject afterwards, nor when they have sex again in the shower that same night. She also doesn’t bring it up when starting to have sex with Shane, although when he cums she describes it as shooting into her “fertile pussy.” So this series seems to be heavily pointing towards the idea that Jessie will end up pregnant by one of this young men.

On the other hand, the titty-fucking scene with Ted was not hot at all. He’s described as an ugly old man, and when he takes down his pants she sees “hit little wrinkled penise and greying tuft of pubic hair”, and how when he came (after just a couple of minutes) all that shot out was a little teaspoon of cum. Really, the scene was kinda gross. If the writer felt the need to add her boss to her list of sexual partners, she could have at least made him handsome too. That and I felt like a little too much time was spent on describing the other women in her office and why they didn’t like Jessie, it just didn’t add anything to the story. That may have been fine if this was written as a full novel, but for short stories I think the writers should concentrate on the good stuff.

Still, as I said, an improvement over the first story, with some hot sex scenes. So if sexy older women banging hot young studs turns you on, I recommend this. Chacebook rating: FOUR STARS

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