I’m going to start off this month with some erotic short stories I’ve purchased lately. I don’t usually buy the really short stories on Amazon in favor of full-length novels or short story collections, but most of these were free when I got them, so why not?
First, I’m not sure if co-writer Holly Hotwife is the porn star who goes by that name, she doesn’t mention writing erotica on her official website, nor could I find any mention of it on her social media pages. Co-writer Arwen Rich has more writing experience but no website or social media.
This 14-page story tells the story of a wild night (and the morning after) for Annie and Jack, a happily married couple who have been together for five years. They still have an active sex life, but three nights before this story began, they had a conversation about kinks, where Jack confessed that he had a fantasy of the two of them having a threesome with another man, as he thinks it would be hot to watch another man fuck her. Annie was surprised but admitted to being open to the idea. Now, unbeknownst to Annie had arranged to make this fantasy come true.
Jack comes home from work (it’s said he has a successful career in finance while Annie is a housewife) and tells her to get dressed because he’s taking her out for a surprise. They drive to the home of Sam, Jack’s best friend, whom Annie admits she’d always been attracted to and once fantasized about while masturbating. Sam is a professional photographer, and Jack says he arranged to have Sam take some naughty pictures of the two of them, which is another fantasy they’d shared before. Sam has a whole set-up with a camera in his bedroom, which has a king-sized bed. Annie is turned on, although she still isn’t sure if it will just be her and Jack or if Sam will join in.
Annie and Jack start to have sex. They begin kissing while taking each other’s clothes off. First, Annie goes down on Jack, sucking his cock until he cums in her mouth. Then they change positions, with Annie laying back on the bed as Jack eats her out, but just before she reaches orgasm, he gets up and starts fucking her. Meanwhile, Sam is getting turned on as he takes pictures of the action. When Jack finally cums inside of Annie’s pussy, he gets off of her and asks her if she wants Sam to fuck her now.
Annie gets up and helps strip Sam’s clothes off of him and then gets on her knees as he stands in front of her and sucks his cock until he cums in her mouth. Then she lays back on the bed, lying on her side, in between Sam and Jack, who are both on their sides. The men take turns, Sam fucks her pussy from the front, and Jack fucks her pussy from behind. The men manage to time their thrusts, Sam sticks his cock in and then pulls out, and Jack sticks his cock in her and then pulls out, and they keep going back and forth until they each cum inside her. They’re all satisfied and exhausted in the end and fall asleep in the bed with Annie still in the middle of both of men.
The following day all three of them wake up and get into Sam’s shower together. First, the two men soap up and wash Annie’s body, and she takes turns kissing each one. Then Annie bends over against the shower wall as Sam fucks her from behind until he cums inside her, and Jack takes his turn and does the same.
When it’s over, everyone is happy and Annie is left hoping that they’ll be doing this again in the future.
For a short story, it’s very good; the sex is very descriptive, and it feels like this is a good start to a married couple entering the hotwife lifestyle. My only complaint is one that I often find in short erotic, which is the lack of description of the characters. I like to be able to envision what the characters, especially the women, look like as I’m reading. But we don’t get much physical description of them, not even their hair colors. All that’s said about Annie is that she has “plump” breasts, Sam is a “tall, thickly muscled man,” and all we learn about Jack is that he has a “thick, generous” cock, although Sam’s cock is said to be even thicker. If that had been included I’d probably give it the top rating, but as such it gets a Chacebook rating of FOUR STARS
Categories: EROTICA/ROMANCE NOVELS

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