EROTICA/ROMANCE NOVELS

Dominatrix Fantasy Trilogy Set: SPANKED, DENIED & COLLARED by Shoshanna Evers

This book is a collection of three separate novellas, all with recurring characters plus one bonus short story, written by Shoshanna Evers.
The main trilogy tells the developing story of the relationship between Blake, a young college student who works as a waiter in a Diner, and Victoria, and older woman who works as a book editor and part-time dominatrix. One night Victoria comes into Blake’s diner and he serves her, but he is so unnerved by her commanding presence that he doesn’t do a very good job. So instead of a tip she leaves him a card saying that he deserves to be punished, and to give her a call if he wants that.

As it turns out, Blake has long had a secret desire to be dominated by a woman. So with great nervousness he calls Victoria and makes arrangements to go to her apartment one night. The first story, SPANKED, describes what happens that first night. She makes him strip fully nude in front of her, then get down on his hands and needs and crawl like a dog. She makes him kneel over her lap and then she spanks him with her bare hand. Then she spanks him even harder with a wooden hairbrush. Despite the pain he maintains an erection throughout the spanking and ejaculates on her leather pants, which she then forces him to lick up off of her. She makes him lay on her bed, then she climbs on top of face and forces him to eat her pussy, then turns around and forces him to lick her asshole. Then she sits on his cock, fucking him with her pussy while she shoves a dildo in and out of his asshole. And when the night is finally over, and young Blake has had the biggest orgasm of his life, she simply kicks him out, though he begs to be allowed to come back for further punishment.

In the follow-up, DENIED, it is a month later, and Blake has been seeing Victoria frequently. But he has been dropping a bit in his grades at school, and he is worried that Victoria will be mad when she finds out, because she insists that he do well. When he arrives at her apartment she once again immediately makes him strip naked, and the has him kneel in front of him as she sits on a chair and uses him as a footstool. She makes him spread his buttcheeks, and she penetrates his asshole with the heel of her boot. Then she takes him into her bedroom where she’s added a chalkboard to the wall, and an old wooden school desk, to play out a school teacher/schoolboy fantasy, and uses a big wooden paddle to spank Blake for his bad grades. She also makes him write lines on the chalkboard then clean that with hit tongue. She makes him sit on stool which has a buttplug on it. She then uses a cat-o-nine-tales on him for some cock and ball torture, until he cums. Then, with the threat of not letting him see her anymore, which he can’t bear, she demands that Blake not be allow to cum again until he gets his grades backup. He agrees, and she locks his cock in a special chastity belt which won’t allow him to get an erection, and forces him to wear it until his next text. For the next two weeks Blake is tortured by his inability to get off. He still visits Victoria, but she never allows him to relieve himself, just makes him study harder. And when he an A on his next test and goes back to Victoria’s for his release, he’s surprised to see another man there. The other man is Jesse, the submissive husband of one of Victoria’s female friends. He’s on loan to Victoria today so that Victoria can “reward” Blake by forcing Jesse to suck Blake’s cock.

I’m not really interesting in reading about that, so I quickly skimmed past to the end of the story. The main significance of this character’s introduction is that it alerts Blake to the reality of a married couple having the same type of dominant/submissive arrangement that he has with Victoria, and this makes him desire to make his relationship with Victoria permanent.

In the finale story of this series, COLLARED, it’s 6 months later, and Victoria and Blake enter into an official relationship, with Blake moving in with Victoria after signing a contract that stipulates her “ownership” of him. And this is symbolized by her putting a collar around his neck (which he wears around the apartment with nothing else on). To celebrate their new arrangement, Victoria invites another couple, a dominant male named Tom and his submissive female slave, Sandy. Sandy is forced to like Blake’s asshole. Then Blake is laid down on the floor as Sandy sits on his cock while Victoria sits on his face. Then Sandy is forced to spank Blake. And then Blake is tied face down on the bed so Tom can fuck his ass, while Victoria spanks Sandy. Ugh. Anyway, skip to the end, when Blake and Victoria are alone again they have a frank discussion about where this new relationship is going and what their boundaries are. And then they have sex, and Blake tells Victoria that he loves her. THE END

Okay, first, I could have done without the male/male stuff. Just not my scene. But overall I thought that the development of the relationship between Blake and Victoria over time was very well written. Evers does a great job in showing all the conflicting emotions that Blake is feeling over time, as even he doesn’t quite understand why pain and humiliation turns him on like it does. We also get some insights into Victoria’s mind as well, as see how much everything she does to Blake turns her on, and how over the course of the series she surprisingly finds herself becoming attached to him, and therefor occasionally worries if she’s pushing him too far too fast with some of her punishments, and risks him wanting to quit. It’s very interesting, in a way these two are written like any average couple developing a relationship, except that this particular relationship happens to include bondage a sexual torture…

The bonus story is called TAPE. It’s a man and woman in a business office acting out a rape fantasy, where he pretends to take her into the supply room and have his way with her. The story felt out of place in this book. It’s called Dominatrix fantasy, meaning people who buy this want to read about women dominating men, not the other way around.

So other than the male/male stuff, and the incompatible short story, this volume, for it’s collection of Spanked, Denied, and Collared, still earns a Chacebook rating of FOUR STARS


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