Today I’m reviewing an erotic short story by author Lexi Rain. The story is narrated by a character named Darren, a recently turned 18 young man in his Senior year of High School. He tells us about his best friend Logan, whom he met in 5th grade and they used to hang out all the time. But after Logan’s father left them, Logan and his mother Christine had to move away to another state, so Darren hasn’t seen Logan in person since then but they’ve stayed in touch over the phone and play video games online. But as Darren will be graduating High School soon he’s been looking at colleges to attend, and one of them happens to be near where Logan and Christine come in, so they’ve invited Darren to come to stay with them for a weekend while he checks out the campus. He admits upfront that the college isn’t one of his favorite choices, but he’s taking the trip to at least get to see his best friend again after all these years.

Darren arrives on a Friday afternoon and is immediately struck by what a bombshell Christine is, noting that he hadn’t hit puberty when he’d last seen her, so he’d never thought of her that way before, but now he’s got butterflies and has to force himself not to stare at her “big and bouncy” breasts. This is despite the fact that she’s “nearing her 50’s” (the synopsis on Amazon says she’s 30 years older than him, so 48 years old, but that’s not explicitly stated in the story). Christine is a nurse who often works late nights, so she leaves and Darren and Logan spend the rest of the day playing video games and catching up.

The next morning Darren wakes up, having slept on the couch. Logan had already left for work, and Christine serves him a homemade breakfast. As she’s setting a tray down on a table for him, she’s wearing nothing but a loose robe, which starts to hang open and show off her breasts, which entices Darren further.  When she notices what’s happening she apologizes and closes her robe, but smiles in such a way that Darren suspects that it was intentional.

Darren spends the day at the college campus, and despite all the hot young chicks he sees, he can’t stop thinking about Christine. Things finally come to a head the next day. Once again Logan had left for work (despite it being Sunday), so just Darren and Christine are in the house. Darren is taking a shower when suddenly Christine opens the door, revealing that she’s as attracted to him as he is to her. She pulls him out of the shower by his cock, gets down on her knees and blows him right there. But she stops before he cums and leads him to her bedroom where she gets naked and on a her bed. Darren eats her out, and then he fucks her doggystyle, all the while she’s moaning about how big he is, until they both cum.

Afterward, Christine has to leave for her, but she and Darren vow to keep this a secret from Logan, and Darren has made up his mind that he will be going to that college after all. THE END

A good short story with just the right amount of build up before it got to the sex, which is what we read these stories for. It could have been a little more descriptive in terms of what the characters, especially Christine, look like, to help set the visual picture as we read it. But I enjoyed it. Chacebook rating: FOUR STARS

I’ll note that while it’s advertisted as 29 pages long, the actual story itself is 22 pages. Then it includes some previews of some of Lexi Rain’s other short stories.

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